First Entry:
The waves crash against the rocks where I sit, alone with my thoughts. The seagulls cry out as they swoop down toward the old man pulling in his nets, hoping for an easy meal. I watch him carefully as he shakes the net, spilling his day’s catch into the bottom of the small wooden vessel. I pull my knees close to my chest to help break the biting, cold wind as I look across the fjord for one last time. Tomorrow I will travel back across the ocean, leaving this land I have grown to love. As the clouds build around the tops of the snow-covered mountains, I look around and wonder, “When will I return to this wonderful country, my family, a place I now also call home?” A place called Norway.
Great writing! I feel like I am at Norway.
How did you get your links on the side…I like that.
Great job!
Amy
By: Amy Hall on January 18, 2008
at 12:15 am
Wow Kari! This is just so beautifully written! Each word is perfectly chosen; your words create such rich imagery… I feel like I am by the ocean as the waves are breaking and the old man is taking care of his nets. You have managed to instill a curiosity in this reader-I want to know more about Norway. Lovely…
By: fryeem on January 20, 2008
at 6:30 pm
That was great my Norwegian cousin!! I hope I can get there some day!!!!!
By: marymcb on January 31, 2008
at 12:28 am
Thank you!
You definitely have to put it on your list of to-do’s! I am sure some of my cousins would gladly offer you a place to stay. I’m so looking forward to this summer!! Hope you have a great week!! See you Tuesday! KH
By: karingteacher on February 12, 2008
at 1:36 am